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How My Clever Mom Takes Care of "the Troublemaker"

3/17/2016

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(A true story inspired from my neighborhood map I’ve been working on for the second edition of Mentor Texts with Rose Cappelli, hopefully published by Stenhouse in 2017).

            Allan Berger was always working some kind of mischief. Mothers would wag their fingers at him and make clucking noises. Fathers would hurl angry shouts in his direction.  (Usually, by that time, Allan was already turning tail and running!). Little kids would sob uncontrollably or hiccup or both.  Thank goodness he left me alone. Until that one afternoon….

            We all attended the neighborhood elementary school, Edmonds, on Thouron Avenue, about six city blocks from my house. No one rode a bus and few kids had car rides to and from school. Everybody walked. It was something that I loved about going to elementary school and later to junior high (a half-block from my home). Walking was fun!  You had time to share stories with your friends, time to think, time to be outside through the four seasons. Most of the time, I walked with Suzy Q, Liz Appelbaum, and my sisters, Diane and Sandy. That fateful afternoon I was alone for the walk home.

            I had stayed after school to talk with my sixth grade teacher, Mrs. Steinberg, about an assigned piece of writing. We had to write about our most unforgettable character. I had chosen my riding instructor, Mick Warmington.  I had so much to say, and I guess I wanted a little guidance on how to narrow my topic.  It was a really warm spring day, and I took my time walking home, still thinking about my “writer’s conference” and mulling over Mrs. Steinberg’s advice. This piece was special because we were going to present our writing to our unforgettable character. I wanted it to be perfect!  So I was thinking and walking, strolling and thinking. The sunshine melted like butter across my face and a light breeze played with my long tresses (halfway down my back) – just enough breeze to make it a cool/warm day in May. I was wearing a pink poodle skirt that would fan out in all directions if I twirled.

            And with no one in view, I twirled and twirled until I was so dizzy I had to stop. I had just finished twirling when a familiar voice said, “Hey, do that again so I can see your underpants. Do they have little pink hearts on them?”  I didn’t need to look back. I knew that voice. I looked straight ahead. The beautiful day had turned frosty, and I shivered. “Didn’t ya hear me?  Twirl again!”

            Then I heard quick footsteps and a little tug. I felt the breeze on the back of my legs. Allan had lifted up my skirt. “Ha! Pink hearts!  Just like I said!” Allan bellowed into the world.

            I broke into a run, taking a short cut through Gilbert Street and over to Durham. Pant, pant, pant. I pumped my arms and ran faster than I can ever remember running. Crossing Durham without looking either way for cars, I leaped onto the sidewalk and raced to 1207. Up the steps and up, up, up the back porch steps. Sanctuary!  I burst through the kitchen door, jogged through the dining room, and pounded up the steps to the safety of my bedroom. Mom followed shortly. By that time, I was sobbing and gasping and blubbering all over the place like a little kid. It was hard to lie to Mom.  She just rubbed my back, handed me tissues, and waited. So I told her the truth.  Mom said she was going to call Allan’s mother, but I begged her not to do it.  I felt I was old enough to handle it on my own.

            That Sunday the doorbell rang around 5:00 p.m., and to my great surprise, Allan Berger, his mom, and his dad were standing at our door. Mom welcomed them as if they were our best friends and ushered them into the dining room. I suddenly realized why Mom had been busy in the kitchen for hours because my mom did not like to cook.  She had set the table for eight – why hadn’t I noticed the extra place settings?  “Lynne, come help me in the kitchen.”  She gave me a wink and I rolled my eyes. “Now, Lynnie,” she whispered, you are going to have to trust me on this. I know what’s best.”

            And so, we had a lovely spaghetti dinner with salad and brownies with vanilla ice-cream for dessert. Allan was very quiet. After dinner, Mom suggested that he help her clear.   I don’t know what was said between Mom and “the troublemaker” in the kitchen that Sunday evening, but I do know that the next day Allan delivered an apology note to me at school and never gave me or anybody else (as far as I knew) any trouble again. My mom was something else!  

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16 Comments
Rose
3/17/2016 05:28:48 am

Yes, you certainly had a very clever mom. She handled it the way she knew would work best, and it did. Today, I think that bully would have been considered a sex offender and more than an apology would be needed.

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lynne dorfman link
3/17/2016 05:54:45 am

Yes, Rosie. You would never get away with something like that today. That was 1963 - and things were different then.

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Adrienne
3/17/2016 05:36:21 am

The dinner was a surprise, but it sounds like something my mom would have done.

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lynne dorfman link
3/17/2016 05:56:07 am

Thanks, Adrienne. I think Mom took care of things and Allan learned a valuable lesson!

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Aileen Hower link
3/17/2016 05:53:36 am

I audibly gasped in the middle of your story - pink hearts! I love your Mom! She is so clever and wise!!

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lynne dorfman link
3/17/2016 06:35:55 am

She was the best, Aileen. I lost her when I was thirty. I miss her every day!

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Diane Dougherty link
3/17/2016 08:26:45 am

Lynne, What a great story! Your mom was wise for sure. I do wish we could know what magic she worked on Alan. Maybe it was kindness. Bullies usually don't get much of that.

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lynne dorfman link
3/17/2016 09:09:52 am

You know, I never asked her what she said. But she was so smart. Whatever she and Allan talked about, you are right about magic. It seemed like that to me, too!

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Fran
3/17/2016 11:14:35 am

Lynne,
Wow! Just a little "Mom Magic" to take care of the "troublemaker"! Such a great story!

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Stacey Shubitz
3/17/2016 12:11:56 pm

What a clever mom you had.

Reading the words "the troublemaker" made me think of Lauren Castillo's book with the same name. Have you seen it?

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Rita Kenefic link
3/17/2016 02:03:58 pm

Lynne, This story is captivating and so well-told. Of course, I can relate to that time, walking to school, the innocence and level of trust. The ending is amazing. Your mother certainly was a wise woman. Such an enjoyable post. Thanks for sharing!

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Tara link
3/17/2016 03:11:30 pm

Your mom was wise! I loved the detailed way in which you created that scene, Lynne.

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Shelly
3/17/2016 04:31:23 pm

I gasped too!!! Kudos to your mom for taking care of "the troublemaker!"

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Clare link
3/17/2016 04:44:41 pm

Lynne, I love these stories of your youth-- I can totally see you in a poodle skirt twirling -I bet you rocked those underpants. I love your mom's line... trust me on this one. She had a clear mind and a strong heart! I love that. I also love that I can hear your laughter in each piece you write. I love your laugh and I love hearing it in your pieces.
Clare

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lynne dorfman link
3/17/2016 06:42:40 pm

Clare, I look forward to your response each day. I am having so much fun writing childhood stories and love writing poetry. I will be sad when March is over!

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Donna Smith link
3/17/2016 06:59:43 pm

Oh, to have been a fly on the wall!

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    Lynne loves to write in the early morning hours, especially in warm weather when she can sit outside on the patio.  After a walk with her three Welsh Corgis, her mind is cleared and her spirit is inspired by the choir of birds in nearby bushes and trrees. 

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