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Arranging the Tulips

4/5/2016

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This post was inspired by the Mary Oliver poem “Freshen the Flowers, She Said.” I recently read this poem for the first time and loved it immediately. Oliver says so much in a few short lines. She reminded me that while I could say “I bought some tulips and put them in a vase,” the moment is special enough to make every move count. I chose to write a descriptive paragraph rather than a poem, although I may return sometime and try it out as a poem.
 
I brought the bunch of ten tulips home to bring a bit of spring into the kitchen. Ten yellow tulips with just a touch of orange for contrast. Buds closed with the promise of a bloom in a day or two. Carefully, I set them in the sink and freed them from the strings and bands and cellophane sleeve that held them together. Each seemed grateful to rest on its own, apart from the others. I made a slanted cut on each stem an inch or two from the bottom, and removed any torn or tattered leaves. I placed them, one by one, in a small glass vase filled with cool water, my fingers feeling the softness of the petals.  One was a bit too high. I pulled it out and repositioned it so that its stem could better reach the bottom. Gently, I unfurled a leaf… and then another. Finally, I stood back and took in the wonder of this gift.
 
Music for the eyes. 
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bernadette laganella link
4/5/2016 03:59:40 am

A meditation on flower arranging. Nicely done.

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Diane Dougherty link
4/5/2016 04:10:54 am

"Each grateful to rest on its own, apart from the others." I often feel this about the flowers I arrange in my kitchen every week. I forget which poet espoused the need for "hyacinths for the soul." But I am totally on board with that philosophy. Fresh flowers brighten my mood always, and your descriptive paragraph captures that mood. Thanks, Rose.

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lynne dorfman link
4/5/2016 04:36:43 am

I love the idea of writing from a line of poetry, but not necessarily writing a poem. The feeling tone came through beautifully as I felt I was watching you arrange your ten yellow tulips!

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Elsie
4/5/2016 05:05:14 am

What a perfect mentor text to demonstrate how to write a lot about a little. Each sentence filled with exquisite details.

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Linda Baie link
4/5/2016 11:16:33 am

I think it is already a poem, Rose, a prose poem! And love that you thought of the flowers' point of view: "Each seemed grateful to rest on its own". Mary Oliver speaks to me, too!

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Clare link
4/5/2016 02:26:01 pm

Love this -- I need to find this poem. I love arranging tulips. I could feel them in my hands as you described your process. I agree with Linda --I think it is poetry!!! I could see it, hear it and feel it!!! Off to find the poem!
Clare

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arjeha link
4/5/2016 02:53:09 pm

A bit of sunshine brought into the house. Hope the flowers bring you many days of pleasure and smiles.

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Molly Hogan link
4/5/2016 03:37:56 pm

This is so lovely and such a wonderful example of slowing down to appreciate the moment, detail by detail. This post was a high point in my day and an inspiration to me to look for such moments to write about. I only hope I can do so as eloquently as you! I'm also off to check out the inspiring poem. Thanks so much for sharing.

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Rose
4/5/2016 04:26:30 pm

Thank you for the kind words, Molly.

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Barbara Suter
4/5/2016 08:50:55 pm

I just happened to be reading a Mary Oliver collection today, Owls and Other Fantasies. I had thought I'd read just a few poems, but ended up reading almost the whole collection! A friend told me about her years ago...as a poet who loves to write about nature. I love the "bird poems." Your prose/poem about the tulips is lovely; I can also imagine it as a poem. It's a perfect slice!

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