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Lies A Fun Poem/Story Format

5/10/2016

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Lies is a fun story format that challenges students to include certain items or words in the text they create. You can also give them a genre or let them choose. My story is written as a poem. It is fantasy and includes the following:  three color words, two holidays, a season, Disneyland, two book characters, a food item, and a familiar quote from a classic or well-known tale.

Another way to do something like this is “Story in a Bag.” Place four to eight items in a bag and write a lead sentence on the board or chart. Let everyone get started writing off that lead. Then pull out one of the items such as a flashlight. Students have to work that item into the story in a way that makes sense. Place the item on a table in plain view. Then pull out the next item after a few items. It could be a pliers, eggbeater, plate, or notebook.   You can also occasionally write a word on the board or pull out a photo from the bag (such as the moon, a rainbow, a screen door). I liked to do this activity on a Friday afternoon to challenge my students to think on their feet and problem solve.  Believe it or not, it helped to develop writing fluency.  After three or four Fridays, I asked students to volunteer in partners to create a “Story in the Bag” and I joined the class to write.

“Book in a Bag” is a little different. Students give a book talk about a book they’ve read by finding four to five items (they can take photos or draw pictures or make sculptures out of clay as well) to tell about their book.  These items are placed in a paper bag. The students must include characters, setting, problem and genre.  Of course, they should not reveal how the story ends. Nonfiction books are also doable in this format.  

               “Under My Pillow: A Message”


Last winter when it snowed purple JELL-O
And hailstones fell as perfectly shaped diamonds,
The Easter Bunny appeared at Christmas time
And placed beautiful painted eggs
under the tree instead of presents.
Time ticked backwards and Winter became fall.
All the leaves changed blue and pink and silver.
Suddenly, Santa appeared in a sleigh
Pulled by eight plant-eating dinosaurs.
Santa handed out reindeer antler swim trunks
And free passes to Disneyland.
I closed my eyes for just one moment
And found myself falling down a long tunnel
Where I met Alice, the Dormouse, and the Mad Hatter.
They were looking for the Tooth Fairy because
Alice had lost a tooth and wasn’t at home
to place it under her pillow.
I blinked, and when I opened my eye
I was back again in my own bed
in my own bedroom….What a relief!
And then I had a strange feeling
That I should peek under my pillow
And to my surprise,
I found four quarters
and a note from the Queen of Hearts
that read, “Off with her head!”
 
 
 

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9 Comments
Diane Dougherty link
5/10/2016 03:35:24 am

Love your poem. I haven't tried that strategy. Fun!

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Rose
5/10/2016 05:44:53 am

My head was reeling with all the twists and turns in your poem!

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Tara link
5/10/2016 09:18:26 am

Your post has filled me with so many wonderful ideas, especially now that we are closing in on the end of the school year. Loved the plot twists in your poem, too!

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Carol Varsalona link
5/10/2016 05:10:24 pm

Lynn, you are off to a running start with creative poetry ideas that I will share with the teachers I will be working with. Now, can I turn your creative wheels some more to compose a digital image poem (poem embedded on a photograph) for my spring gallery? I suggested to Rose for you two to compose one on your birdwatching sessions. (invitation: http://beyondliteracylink.blogspot.com/2016/05/spring-gallery-invitation.html)

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lynne dorfman link
5/11/2016 05:11:47 am

Hi, Carol. Thanks for the invitation. I will talk with Rose. Have something to send you later. My best....Lynne

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Clare link
5/10/2016 05:46:35 pm

Lynne - what a great exercise!! I have been trying exercises more for my own writing and I am amazed how powerful the process is for my writing. I have never tried this before- but I did for poetry in April and it was so helpful. Thanks for sharing this idea and you fun and marvelous poem!!
Clare

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Shelly
5/10/2016 06:21:13 pm

How fun!!!! Love this format, Lynne! Might have to try this as a whole group writing activity!!!

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7/20/2022 03:35:28 pm

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5/13/2024 03:55:03 am

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    Lynne loves to write in the early morning hours, especially in warm weather when she can sit outside on the patio.  After a walk with her three Welsh Corgis, her mind is cleared and her spirit is inspired by the choir of birds in nearby bushes and trrees. 

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