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Right Outside My Window

3/27/2016

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 (A seed of any idea from a mentor text, Right Outside My Window by Mary Ann Hoberman.  Written Saturday afternoon after a glorious day of planting pansies and hyacinths in my garden.)


Today, I observe the thick greenness of the grass in my backyard and the tiny pink buds and red-purple leaves on the crab apple trees. Fat robins are everywhere, and my husband has dragged all the hoses from the garage to clean and fill the bird baths. I am almost certain a chickadee is building a nest in one of the tiny birdhouses. It is wonderful that it is so warm I am not even wearing a coat as I stand to survey the landscape. My two Welsh Corgis sprint back and forth by the fence that separates us from Sandy Run Park, probably because a squirrel has been spotted.

I hope this year I am here to notice the pink-petal beauty that fills my windowscapes.  Sometimes, I have been away at a conference – just long enough to miss the big show!  Usually, I wait until late April for this pageantry, but this year I think it may be quite early.  How fleeting some things are – like the delicate petals that fall like pink rain shortly after they bloom!  I’ve been waiting for Spring very patiently and only wish that she would stay a little longer.  I always feel I have to say good-bye to her too soon.  I sigh. This, I believe, is often true of so many things.
 



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Janice Ewing
3/27/2016 04:24:11 am

Lynne, I'm working on my post for the PAWLP blog, about poetry, and I'm also focusing on the idea of noticing. I think, like you, that that's the key to poetry and to appreciation of the beauty around us.

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lynne dorfman link
3/27/2016 05:12:48 am

I can't wait to read your post, Janice! I love to write poetry but often think that Frost and Keats and Shakespeare would laugh their heads off or wince painfully at my attempts. That being said, I will continue to write poems anyway. I love doing it. And you are right - it all begins with noticing - noticing the extraordinary in the ordinary. Small miracles happen each and every day! A spider spins a web, the moon seems to be tangled up in the branches of a tall tree, a newborn recognizes Daddy and smiles!

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Diane Dougherty link
3/27/2016 04:51:28 am

I love how you used the mentor text to inspire your noticings. We are hunting for eggs as I type this. I'm noticing my four grandsons finding their special eggs. Later, I'll notice how silent the house is without them. Happy Sunday!

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lynne dorfman link
3/27/2016 05:15:03 am

Oh, The egg hunt is already under way! You will have another piece for tomorrow's slice! I have a photo of the pot of pansies, but forgot to include it in the post. Going back in a few minutes to upload and republish. Have a wonderful day with your family, Diane!

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Rose Cappelli
3/27/2016 05:50:42 am

Looks like we were thinking alike yesterday. Your descriptions bring everything to life - just like spring. Have a great day!

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Shelly
3/27/2016 05:54:50 am

Hope you don't miss the big show this year!!! Sounds like a beautiful day of observing and enjoying the outdoors!

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PaulaBourque link
3/27/2016 08:41:17 am

I need to get a copy of RIGHT OUTSIDE MY WINDOW. I think that would be a perfect mentor text. Spring here is usually weeks behind the posts and pics I see my friends share and so I am filled with anticipation as I read them. Ever so slowly I watch for subtle signs-and they are beginning to reappear. I hope your spring is as beautiful as you imagine.

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lynne dorfman link
3/27/2016 09:49:57 am

Hi, Paula. Right Outside My Window is a simple picture book that yakes you thru the seasons. Try Ron Hirschi's book Spring. He has one on each season..They are beautifully written.

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Clare link
3/28/2016 04:42:52 am

Such a scene you have capture - so true that spring seems to come and go so quickly. I was in Memphis for the weekend and spring had sprung. Gorgeous! I am very curious about you chickadees --hope to hear more about them.
Clare

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Mallory link
5/20/2022 09:33:24 am

Thanks forr this

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    Lynne loves to write in the early morning hours, especially in warm weather when she can sit outside on the patio.  After a walk with her three Welsh Corgis, her mind is cleared and her spirit is inspired by the choir of birds in nearby bushes and trrees. 

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