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What Should I Write About?: What Makes a Memory

3/28/2016

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People often write memoirs thinking they need to write about the most meaningful, most dramatic or most life-changing moments in their life’s story. They choose snapshots from their lives like the joy they felt with the birth of their first child, the difficulties of going through treatment for a serious illness, or the delight of a special anniversary. But there are hundreds of moments in every life worth capturing in a memoir or autobiography.


They are the ordinary activities of life, made fascinating by the passage of time and the way the world changes around us. How you got to school or what you paid for coffee and a doughnut as a young person might not have seemed worth noting at the time, but today, your grandkids have a very different story to tell! The contrast between how you grew up and their lives today is really quite amazing. And imagine the differences possible in another generation! These are the sorts of details that bring a memoir to life and make it relevant to younger generations of readers. So you shouldn’t feel like every chapter in your life’s story needs to be monumental – it just needs to be full of little stories and reminiscences that speak about you and the times you lived in. Fireflies! By Julie Brinckloe is a wonderful example of an ordinary event captured in a picture book. Do you remember catching or watching fireflies on a warm June night?

 
Research is sometimes needed in order to write more, or at least, write accurately. My father always talked about my grandfather’s store on Wyoming Avenue in Philadelphia. If I wanted to include this memory in a piece of writing or as part of my family’s story, I would probably do some additional research.  So, for example, I knew when the picture was taken – in the late 1920’s.  I also knew my grandfather sold fresh fruits and vegetables.  As you can see, the shelves are stacked high with canned goods.  At that time there were no frozen food packages because that technology was not available yet.  There is a sign that advertises cans of Norwegian sardines in olive oil for 15 cents a can.  Today, a can of sardines costs about three dollars!  A pound of cheese in 1924 was 38 cents, and a pound of coffee was 47 cents.  Today, we would pay over four dollars on average, depending on the coffee brand.  The floors in my grandfather’s  store were wooden, so they were easy to sweep and clean.  There is also a sign for Bond Bread.  In 1929, the cost of Bond Bread dropped to 1 cent a loaf.  The Great Depression lasted from 1929 to 1939.  My grandparents lived through hard times during this era.  To write about the store and my father’s childhood, I need to better understand what it was like economically, culturally, and politically. That will help me write with a different lens than the one I use to view life in 2016.

 
Writers often need a “spark” or a question to answer to begin their journey down memory lane. Sometimes answering a simple question can get you thinking about a certain period in your life, and suddenly lots of memories you hadn’t thought of in ages are right at your fingertips. Now is the time to write them down. No need to write a fully-formed “chapter” right now – just jot down a few notes to store the memory for now. Fleshing out the chapter can come later.  First, rely on your writer’s notebook to get you started. Then, if you are writing a book, it’s one chapter at a time. Eventually, if you carve out a little time for writing every day, an entire novel, picture book, or article is ready to send out into the world for reviews, and hopefully, publication!


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Cindy link
3/28/2016 03:54:30 am

A lot to think about here. Thank you.

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Diane Dougherty link
3/28/2016 03:59:34 am

Good advice for writers, Lynne.
I love the picture too. Every time I see it, it makes me wonder about the people in it and what they were thinking.
Yesterday we spent time with our grandkids ages 2 to 18. They noticed the pictures of my father in his WW I uniform and the one of my sister in her pink dress. The questions they asked about the pictures became stories that they found pretty interesting!
Photos provide sparks for memories.

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Clare link
3/28/2016 04:49:10 am

Lynne, so much advice in this post - I feel like I took a course! I printed it to hold onto in the future. This post would be great to share with kids too -you are so clear on the process of using seed ideas and research to write memoir . I love this liine: Writers often need a “spark” or a question to answer to begin their journey down memory lane.
Clare

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lynne dorfman link
3/28/2016 05:24:54 am

Thanks, Clare. I will send a better photo of the store via email later today in case you want to use it along with a Word Document I created for writing about primary source documents. At car dealership right now for oil change, wtc.

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Shelly
3/28/2016 05:53:33 am

Thanks for all the great advice, Lynne! Will definitely hold onto it!

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Tara link
3/28/2016 07:17:51 am

Such great advice, Lynne - I'm saving this for our historical fiction writing unit.

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Rose
3/28/2016 08:06:27 am

A great picture to accompany some good advice about finding memories. Looking at pictures can remind us of the people, the place, the event, or the conversation.

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Rita Kenefic link
3/28/2016 02:10:51 pm

My grandfather and later my dad, owned a meat store. This picture looks very similar to ones of seen of their store. This slice was packed with great advice, Lynn. I love to write little stories from the past. Appreciate the tips and encouragement.

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Rita DiCarne link
3/28/2016 03:59:39 pm

Lynne, I always learn so much from your posts. You remind me to look for writing in the little things. After all, isn't that what makes us writers to begin with?
"Writers see the world differently. Every voice we hear, every face we see, every hand we touch could become story fabric." –Buffy Andrew

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