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A New Writing Mentor

7/29/2015

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          At the recent ILA Conference in St. Louis I was introduced to a wonderful second-grade writing mentor named Stella. Stella is the main character and narrator in a series of three books by Janiel Wagstaff: Stella Tells Her Story, Stella Writes an Opinion, and Stella and Class: Information Experts. These books are must-haves for elementary teachers who may be struggling a bit with teaching writing, or who are looking for good student writing to use as models in their classrooms. Even though the books and the writing pieces within them were written by an adult, Stella’s young voice can be heard loud and clear.

            The three books follow the same format but differ in the writing genre being presented. In the beginning of each book we see Stella in her classroom at the start of a new writing unit, engaging in the kind of prewriting strategy we would expect for that particular type of writing – listening to a classmate’s story about his new puppy, wondering and questioning about chameleons, or thinking about a topic that she really cares about. Stella takes us through every phase of the writing process from brainstorming to planning to drafting to revising. As readers, we have a front row seat to watch her writing piece unfold. Each book ends with an event that occurs two weeks after the conclusion of the writing, showing readers the powerful effects of writing when it is shared with others and reminding us that writing doesn’t always end with the last word on the page.

            I was immediately drawn to Stella. She’s engaging, positive, and persevering – just the kind of writing mentor students need. As Wagstaff explains in her author’s note, “Stella’s a powerful mentor and will be a true inspiration for your students.”  Stella’s teacher, Mrs. Merkley, is also a wonderful mentor. She knows just the right questions to ask to help her students expand on their thoughts, sometimes just nudging them with a “Tell me more…” response. She encourages talk in the classroom so all students have the opportunity to share and formulate ideas. And, when Stella gets stuck, Mrs. Merkley gently leads her to what she might consider on her own instead of simply telling her what to do.

            The resources available for the books are an added bonus. In the back of each book, Wagstaff recounts the strategies mentioned in the story. For example, in Stella Tells Her Story, she reminds us of the specific pages where Stella used rereading and questioning to come up with a better ending. Not only will teachers find this resource useful while conducting conferences, but students themselves can find the specific pages in the book that address an area where they might need some help.

            In addition, Wagstaff provides online resources at www.sde.com/Stella. Here teachers can find suggestions for using the books in their classrooms, error-free copies of Stella’s texts, and additional ideas and information about teaching writing. I was excited to read that Wagstaff not only encourages teachers to model with their own writing, but also places an emphasis on the value of shared writing at all levels. This is a step that is often left out because of time, but it is so essential for all students.
                    Remember to include modeled and shared writing regularly with older students. 
                   They need the inside peek into a writer’s head and to cooperatively grapple with 
                   composing text just as much as their younger cohorts.
http://www.sde.com/PD-Resources/Book-Resources/Stella/Default/Use-a-Combination-of-Writing-Modes

            I am always looking for good mentor texts to pass along to teachers, and this series will definitely be one that I recommend. Both students and teachers will find inspiration from Stella! 

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A Friendly Rain

7/21/2015

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One of the added benefits of attending a conference is the opportunity it gives us to meet new people and to reconnect with friends and colleagues from across the country. We collaboratively learn, think, wonder, and discover, but we also get to celebrate each other and create new memories.

This past weekend I attended the ILA Conference in St. Louis. On Sunday evening, eight of us decided to celebrate our last night at the conference by taking in the sights at the Missouri Botanical Garden. They were having a special Chinese Lantern Festival, and the word on the street was that it was spectacular. So even though there was the threat of a thunderstorm, we took the chance that the rain would hold off until later.

Our group arrived in time to see the Chinese Acrobatic Troupe who amazed us with feats of strength and mystery. Afterward, just as the lantern displays were lit, we wandered down paths lined with phlox and zinnias that winked at us from behind clusters of ornamental elephant grass. The larger-than-life lantern displays of silk and steel were truly amazing! At first, the intermittent drops of rain that fell were not enough to intrude on our wonder and quiet conversations. But within a few minutes, the rain became a steady downpour. We were caught. And, by the time we reached a temporary shelter under a small tent, we were soaked.

The truly amazing thing was that none of us wanted to abandon our initial plans to share an evening together. So, we found our way to three different hotels through sheets of pouring rain with the help of navigator Mike (who happened to have a car), and trusty Abdul, our cab driver who answered the call. Within a short time we were together again for a late night dinner, perhaps a little disheveled, but at least dry.

For the next few hours we ate and drank and laughed. We talked about an upcoming family wedding, hiking and biking experiences, spiritual beliefs, skiing adventures, and personal and professional plans. The stories we shared soaked into our hearts and minds like the rain soaking into our skin.

Friends…good friends…and a shared memory we will have forever.


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The Rhythm of the Fireflies

7/7/2015

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Our dog, Cyrus, usually sleeps well and doesn’t disturb anyone until we get up in the morning. But a few nights ago he was awake at 3:00 a.m., clearly trying to rouse someone. He trotted from one side of the bed to the other, whimpering and nudging. Since this behavior was unusual, I knew I should comply with his wishes. As soon as I got out of bed, Cyrus raced downstairs to the side door and was happy (probably relieved) that I let him out.

So what do you do at 3:00 in the morning while you wait for your dog to finish his business? I walked out onto the enclosed porch that overlooks our backyard to see if anything was going on and was rewarded with a spectacular show from the fireflies. There were hundreds it seemed, and I watched closely to try to figure out the rhythm they were creating, wondering if the timing of the flashing was deliberate. I had recently seen something on television about a place in the mountains of Tennessee where a certain species of fireflies flashes with synchronicity. I was fascinated to the point of trying to sing a tune in my head to go with the rhythm of the fireflies as I watched.

Before long Cyrus was back, and we both returned to the comfort of bed. But I couldn’t stop thinking about those fireflies. I have since found out that there may be several species of fireflies in an area at any given time, each one having their own code of flashing. The code comes from the male who signals to the female what species he is, hoping for a mate.

Whether it’s the dance of the bees or the rhythm of the fireflies, nature is always putting on a show.


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