Morning Symphony
The sun rises
and the choir begins
a symphony of
chips and chirps
whistles and warbles
trills and tweets
each cadenza a song of praise,
thankful for this new day.
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I’ve been reading and recording in my notebook at least one poem a day during April. Most of the poems (probably 95%) are from Mary Oliver. Her focus on the natural world and her ability to find the extraordinary in the ordinary and record her thoughts in the most eloquent of ways have captivated me this month. So, on this last Tuesday in April, I used her influence, her mentorship, to craft a poem of my own. For my poem “Morning Symphony” I first read and reread Mary Oliver’s poem “The Wren” as well as Birdsongs by Betsy Franco. Then I dug into my musical background and listed as many musical terms as I could think of. Then I listened…and listened…and listened, as each morning I was greeted with song.
Morning Symphony The sun rises and the choir begins a symphony of chips and chirps whistles and warbles trills and tweets each cadenza a song of praise, thankful for this new day.
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