Morning Symphony
The sun rises
and the choir begins
a symphony of
chips and chirps
whistles and warbles
trills and tweets
each cadenza a song of praise,
thankful for this new day.
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I’ve been reading and recording in my notebook at least one poem a day during April. Most of the poems (probably 95%) are from Mary Oliver. Her focus on the natural world and her ability to find the extraordinary in the ordinary and record her thoughts in the most eloquent of ways have captivated me this month. So, on this last Tuesday in April, I used her influence, her mentorship, to craft a poem of my own. For my poem “Morning Symphony” I first read and reread Mary Oliver’s poem “The Wren” as well as Birdsongs by Betsy Franco. Then I dug into my musical background and listed as many musical terms as I could think of. Then I listened…and listened…and listened, as each morning I was greeted with song.
Morning Symphony The sun rises and the choir begins a symphony of chips and chirps whistles and warbles trills and tweets each cadenza a song of praise, thankful for this new day.
12 Comments
4/26/2016 07:14:33 am
Lovely! I am with you about Mary Oliver. For "poem in your pocket day" I carried around "The Journey" one of my favorites.
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4/26/2016 08:49:09 am
I like the "symphony" very much, and the idea of mentoring for yourself this time.
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4/26/2016 09:06:37 am
Thanks for introducing me to a new poet. I love the natural world and am going to look up her work. Your poem makes me feel at peace.
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4/26/2016 12:52:02 pm
Rose, I enjoyed reading your poem and it reminded me that last year my gallery was called Spring's Symphony. This year it is Spring's Seeds but this poem would fit nicely. Are you interested in offering it? I need a photo to go with it for an #imagepoem. See last year's gallery at http://beyondliteracylink.blogspot.com/2015/07/springs-symphony-unveiled.html
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Rose
4/26/2016 05:03:03 pm
Yes. I think I might be interested. You can contact me at [email protected]
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elsie
4/26/2016 01:19:03 pm
You've listened with a poet's ear to create this wonderful poem. The birds truly do usher in a new day with delightful songs.
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Rose - this is so beautiful. There are birds tweeting outside my window -- your poem caused me to pause, notice and appreciate the symphony. I love running in the early morning -- the sounds are so perfect. I will think of your poem on my morning runs! Thank you
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Shelly
4/26/2016 03:23:13 pm
Love your poem, Rose! I will have to check out Mary Oliver! Thank you for sharing!
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4/26/2016 03:27:29 pm
Your poem is wonderful, Rose. I just started to walk each day and thinking about hearing the sounds of the birds provides a big incentive to put on my sneakers. I'll think of this poem as I walk. Thanks!
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4/27/2016 01:17:08 pm
Great poem, Rose! I know you love watching the birds. I particularly like the structure of this piece!
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